User contributions for 210.22.142.82

28 November 2016

• 11:1111:11, 28 November 2016diff hist +811‎ Talk:Hair (film)‎ →‎"Time Out" removal: new section
• 11:0211:02, 28 November 2016diff hist −534‎ Hair (film)‎No edit summaryTag: references removed

27 November 2016

• 04:0704:07, 27 November 2016diff hist +540‎ Talk:Enguerrand VII de Coucy‎ →‎Destruction of the estate

6 November 2016

• 07:3507:35, 6 November 2016diff hist −5‎ Stickum‎ It's only 'discredited' if you believe it two other people with a vested interest. More accurate to say denied, instead. ~~~~

3 November 2016

• 11:1111:11, 3 November 2016diff hist −10‎ Doris Singleton‎ →‎Early life and career: redundant. Are there any non-classical ballerinas ? ~~~~
• 11:0911:09, 3 November 2016diff hist +465‎ User talk:DocRushing‎ →‎October 2012 – failure and refusal of Tinton5 to discuss false accusations

2 November 2016

• 14:0914:09, 2 November 2016diff hist −1‎ John Boyd (military strategist)‎ →‎Military theories: "whilst", uhh, no. This is 2016, not 1730 ~~~~

29 October 2016

• 11:5111:51, 29 October 2016diff hist +289‎ Talk:Virginia-class submarine‎ →‎Running Out of States

21 October 2016

• 13:0013:00, 21 October 2016diff hist +194‎ Talk:Troilus and Cressida‎ →‎Ulysses or Odysseus
• 12:5112:51, 21 October 2016diff hist −8‎ Troilus and Cressida‎ →‎Synopsis: "beloved" is not suitable for this sentence ~~~~

19 October 2016

• 03:1503:15, 19 October 2016diff hist −13‎ The Guns of August‎ →‎Battle: removed gushy twaddle adjective ~~~~

17 October 2016

• 13:4113:41, 17 October 2016diff hist +358‎ User talk:Jonathan.s.kt‎ →‎"Outside": new section

12 September 2016

• 13:3713:37, 12 September 2016diff hist +632‎ User talk:Andy Dingley‎ →‎Parallel twins & crankshaft flywheels

11 September 2016

• 13:2513:25, 11 September 2016diff hist −7‎ Maoism‎ →‎Iconoclastic revolution/anti-Confucianism: We don't need to lick boots here ~~~~
• 05:5805:58, 11 September 2016diff hist +397‎ Talk:Fire (Arthur Brown song)‎ →‎Psychedelic ?: new section

10 September 2016

• 04:4504:45, 10 September 2016diff hist −14‎ Nineteen Eighty-Four‎ →‎History and title: An opinion in the Guardian is not literary scholarship, nor is Paul Owen an authority of any sort. Resemblances exist and Orwell was aware of the novel, so a mention seems justified but the original sentence was way too strong ~~~~
• 02:4002:40, 10 September 2016diff hist −10‎ Issaquah (steam ferry)‎ →‎Disposition: didn't see the "as of 2011" part, oops. Don't need 'currently' then ~~~~
• 02:3902:39, 10 September 2016diff hist +2‎ Issaquah (steam ferry)‎ →‎Disposition: grammar, tense, and so on. 'Things' cannot 'reside' etc etc ~~~~
• 02:3602:36, 10 September 2016diff hist 0‎ Issaquah (steam ferry)‎ →‎California service: She's obviously NOT a paddlewheeler, just look at the photo. Also, I lived 100 yards away from her and remember her fondly but that's personal research. She has propellers, not sidewheels. In fact, that was a drawback ~~~~
• 02:3002:30, 10 September 2016diff hist +62‎ Issaquah (steam ferry)‎ "can be seen" and "visible" are redundant. And she's not at a dock, she's already in the mud. I have a screenshot from the movie but that's copyright, I'm certain. ~~~

9 September 2016

• 14:3014:30, 9 September 2016diff hist +5‎ Talk:USS Enterprise (NCC-1701)‎ →‎Doors / Hatches: clarity ~~~~
• 14:2914:29, 9 September 2016diff hist +878‎ Talk:USS Enterprise (NCC-1701)‎ →‎Doors / Hatches: new section
• 13:3513:35, 9 September 2016diff hist −9‎ Gene Roddenberry‎ →‎1970s projects: "Shorter is better" --Ernest Hemingway ~~~~

4 September 2016

• 14:0114:01, 4 September 2016diff hist +376‎ User talk:JohnBlackburne‎ →‎Linking to IPA help pages
• 13:4613:46, 4 September 2016diff hist +773‎ Talk:War Crimes Act of 1996‎ →‎Legislative History
• 12:2112:21, 4 September 2016diff hist +12‎ John Yoo‎ Since it was repudiated within two days by the next administration, "attempt" would be a more accurate term. In the eyes of much of the world, NOTHING "legitimized" the actions of the Bush administration ~~~~
• 09:3909:39, 4 September 2016diff hist +484‎ Talk:Fascism‎ →‎Auschwitz in See also section
• 09:3109:31, 4 September 2016diff hist +490‎ Talk:Fascism‎ →‎Semi-protected edit request on 13 July 2016 for "Fascism"
• 09:1409:14, 4 September 2016diff hist −26‎ Fascism‎ →‎Unprincipled opportunism: Mussolini, of course. The proper noun is two words prior to the "who" I removed, and is entirely comprehensible to anyone who speaks English ~~~~

3 September 2016

• 13:4713:47, 3 September 2016diff hist −212‎ Century Dictionary‎ →‎External links: Removed, as those were just sales links to Amazon or, in the case of Wordnik, totally unrelated to the Century dictionary. ~~~
• 11:1811:18, 3 September 2016diff hist +10‎ Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky‎ →‎Return to Russia: New York is in the US, let's pin it down a little closer than "the western hemisphere" ~~~~

29 August 2016

• 12:5112:51, 29 August 2016diff hist −131‎ R v Perka‎ →‎Raid: Incompetent, irrelevant and immaterial. That is not the ONLY conclusion one could draw, therefore it does not belong. For instance, crew claim was they went to calm water to allow sediment to settle out of the fuel. Perhaps that happened ~~~~
• 09:3309:33, 29 August 2016diff hist −1‎ Delta King‎ →‎Current Duty: too many commas in that sentence, makes it confusing. In fact, my 8th grade English teacher would mark the paper down as a 'run-on sentence' ~~~~

27 August 2016

• 01:4101:41, 27 August 2016diff hist 0‎ Ontario‎ →‎European Conquest: unified the headings. All the others are first word uppercase, second word lowercase so may as well be the same. This one was my fault ~~~~
• 01:3801:38, 27 August 2016diff hist +1‎ Ontario‎ →‎European contact: more accurate term for what actually happened. Europeans arrived, killed all the natives and took everything. That's conquest, not contact. ~~~~

25 August 2016

• 14:4014:40, 25 August 2016diff hist −8‎ Mr. Toad's Wild Ride‎ →‎Magic Kingdom version: Seems like someone is aching to add "inline citations". Why not just inline "the" and "an" ? Pretty ridiculous ~~~~

24 August 2016

• 13:0213:02, 24 August 2016diff hist +375‎ User talk:Merenta‎ →‎a queery, he asked: new section
• 04:5604:56, 24 August 2016diff hist +255‎ Talk:New Beverly Cinema‎ →‎History ?: new section

23 August 2016

• 09:2209:22, 23 August 2016diff hist −1‎ King of Hearts (1966 film)‎ →‎Theatrical releases: fixed punctuation ~~~~
• 09:2109:21, 23 August 2016diff hist +10‎ King of Hearts (1966 film)‎ →‎Theatrical releases: I don't think they were showing it in Guatemala ~~~~
• 09:1109:11, 23 August 2016diff hist +331‎ Talk:Port Townsend, Washington‎ →‎Economics

10 August 2016

• 10:5910:59, 10 August 2016diff hist +786‎ User talk:SilkTork‎ →‎pushing a rock up hill ...: new section
• 10:2410:24, 10 August 2016diff hist +5‎ Janis Joplin‎ Umm, Big Borther was not "unknown" at all. They were huge in San Francisco. So I'll go along to the extent of "little-known" because probably no one knew of them in Omaha ~~~~

9 August 2016

• 13:1513:15, 9 August 2016diff hist −64‎ Power inverter‎ →‎Sine wave: AC power as delivered by a utility doesn't "attempt to approximate a sine wave" - it IS a sine wave. Stick a scope on it some time. ~~~~
• 08:4208:42, 9 August 2016diff hist +248‎ Talk:Urine-diverting dry toilet‎ →‎The term septic-based system is ill-defined and other small things
• 08:2808:28, 9 August 2016diff hist +2‎ Urine-diverting dry toilet‎ →‎Boating, recreational vehicles and camping: c-head and boonjon are the same product, plus air head and nature's head (different products) equals three. Plus there are others that are not mentioned ~~~~
• 08:1408:14, 9 August 2016diff hist +3‎ Urine-diverting dry toilet‎ →‎Other (portable, mobile): Altho common, it is not grammatically correct to use 'like' in this way ~~~~

25 July 2016

• 15:0115:01, 25 July 2016diff hist +252‎ Talk:Lady Jane Grey‎ →‎de facto monarch?
• 13:5213:52, 25 July 2016diff hist +757‎ Talk:Santa Venetia, California‎ →‎Airstrip: answered question
• 12:4212:42, 25 July 2016diff hist +1‎ Mary I of England‎ →‎Birth and family: vocabulary correction.