User contributions for Freeman501

15 June 2024

• 00:4900:49, 15 June 2024diff hist −4‎ mFallout (American TV series)‎ →‎Guest: Replaced slightly awkward phrase with a more conventional one.
• 00:4400:44, 15 June 2024diff hist +2‎ mFallout (American TV series)‎ →‎Premise: To clearly indicate that the squire is not a bounty hunter and avoid the reader having to read the sentence again.Tag: Visual edit
• 00:3800:38, 15 June 2024diff hist 0‎ Fallout (American TV series)‎ →‎Premise: Correction of tense.Tag: Visual edit
• 00:3400:34, 15 June 2024diff hist +3‎ mFallout (American TV series)‎ →‎Guest: Copy edit.

13 June 2024

• 22:1622:16, 13 June 2024diff hist −1‎ mThe Sopranos season 1‎ →‎Episodes: "exposes" was probably meant here and not "espouses".

5 June 2024

• 21:2721:27, 5 June 2024diff hist +3‎ mTime Variance Authority‎ Copy edit - adjusted a sentence in the lede.Tag: Visual edit

3 June 2024

• 00:1700:17, 3 June 2024diff hist −1‎ mMusidora‎ →‎Other works: “Relegate” is not quite the right word: it has elements of a kind of exile, a sending away “Confine” or “restrict” would be better – a sense of keeping in the same place.currentTag: Visual edit

29 May 2024

• 12:1312:13, 29 May 2024diff hist −3‎ mThe Gentlemen (2024 TV series)‎ Groundskeeper, an American term. In a British setting, the appropriate term for a man such as Geoffrey, portrayed patrolling the estate with a shotgun, is a gamekeeper. He calls himself a gamekeeper in episode 8.

21 May 2024

• 14:1914:19, 21 May 2024diff hist +6‎ mCriticism of Muhammad‎ →‎Psychological and medical condition: Resolved the singular and plural clash of “those who suffered” and “was … a wretch”. Also the poor English that “perception” was a “wretch”.Tag: Visual edit
• 12:5812:58, 21 May 2024diff hist +1‎ mMuhammad‎ →‎Invasion of Khaybar: The correct English phrase is "that very night" and not "the very night", a phrase that makes no sense.Tag: Visual edit

20 May 2024

• 18:1518:15, 20 May 2024diff hist 0‎ mHagarism‎ →‎Methodology: You 'give' or 'provide' an account, rather than 'tell' an account.Tag: Visual edit

19 May 2024

• 04:2204:22, 19 May 2024diff hist +2‎ mPapal infallibility‎ →‎Ordinatio sacerdotalis: Copy edit apostrophe.Tag: Visual edit
• 00:5700:57, 19 May 2024diff hist −4‎ mShola Mos-Shogbamimu‎ →‎Death threats: Incorrect use of reflexive pronoun.Tag: Visual edit

12 May 2024

• 17:1217:12, 12 May 2024diff hist +20‎ mMAC address‎ →‎Address details: Copy edit.Tag: Visual edit

5 May 2024

• 22:4722:47, 5 May 2024diff hist −1‎ mTemporal paradox‎ →‎Logical impossibility: Remove unnecessary "they".Tag: Visual edit
• 22:3022:30, 5 May 2024diff hist +8‎ mTemporal paradox‎ →‎Grandfather paradox: Copy edit - replace pronoun with a noun.Tag: Visual edit

30 April 2024

• 01:2501:25, 30 April 2024diff hist −3‎ mPaulie Gualtieri‎ →‎Season 4: Copy edit. "Restores" is a more suitable verb than "rejuvenates".Tag: Visual edit

21 April 2024

• 22:0422:04, 21 April 2024diff hist −1‎ m3 Body Problem (TV series)‎ →‎Episodes: Copy edit. 'Get' is a poor verb to use here.

17 April 2024

• 18:4918:49, 17 April 2024diff hist −6‎ mPrion‎ →‎History: Copy edit. 'Go' is unnecessary in this sentence. Colloquial rather than encyclopaedic English.Tag: Visual edit
• 04:2904:29, 17 April 2024diff hist +4‎ mMargaret Howe Lovatt‎ →‎Personal life: Copy edit. Change to correct tense.

15 April 2024

• 23:4123:41, 15 April 2024diff hist +21‎ m1936 Tulkarm shooting‎ →‎Incident: Copy edit.currentTag: Visual edit

10 April 2024

• 22:0222:02, 10 April 2024diff hist +69‎ Arrival (film)‎ →‎Plot: Copy edit.Tag: Visual edit

1 April 2024

• 12:2512:25, 1 April 2024diff hist −1‎ mThe Gentlemen (2024 TV series)‎ →‎Episodes: This is a plural, not a possessive.

27 March 2024

• 17:5817:58, 27 March 2024diff hist +39‎ mBodies (2023 TV series)‎ Moved the link for Metropolitan Police in the Episodes section up to a more suitable position.
• 17:4617:46, 27 March 2024diff hist +277‎ mBodies (2023 TV series)‎ →‎Episodes: Copy edit to clarify some details. S01E01.

14 March 2024

• 13:0813:08, 14 March 2024diff hist 0‎ mNetley Hospital‎ →‎Decline: Copy edit.Tag: Visual edit

3 March 2024

• 02:1902:19, 3 March 2024diff hist −11‎ mLudwig Rabus‎ →‎Works: Copy edit.currentTag: Visual edit
• 02:1602:16, 3 March 2024diff hist +25‎ Ludwig Rabus‎ Copy editing to improve some phrasing and correct a typo.Tag: Visual edit

1 March 2024

• 18:5518:55, 1 March 2024diff hist +1‎ mLast universal common ancestor‎ →‎Root of the tree of life: Insert missing comma.Tag: Visual edit

29 February 2024

• 00:2300:23, 29 February 2024diff hist −4‎ mJoint European Torus‎ →‎Background: This word is unnecessary and contributes nothing to the sense of the sentence.Tag: Visual edit

28 February 2024

• 03:0103:01, 28 February 2024diff hist +4‎ mBig Sky (American TV series)‎ →‎Season 1 (2020–21): "Accomplices" is a better word to describe two individuals and avoids confusion over conflicting meanings of "cohorts".
• 01:4601:46, 28 February 2024diff hist −2‎ mJoe Pickett (TV series)‎ →‎Recurring: Here, where there are two sons, they are described as "elder" and "younger". You only use "eldest" and "youngest" when there are three or more sons. Very common error.Tag: Visual edit

13 February 2024

• 06:0806:08, 13 February 2024diff hist +7‎ Coco Chanel‎ →‎World War II: Copy editTag: Visual edit

26 January 2024

• 18:5618:56, 26 January 2024diff hist 0‎ mNational Service (Armed Forces) Act 1939‎ A more suitable word than "impacts".Tag: Visual edit

18 January 2024

• 01:2201:22, 18 January 2024diff hist +59‎ mThe 39 Steps (1935 film)‎ →‎Plot: Add details of the closing frames.Tag: Visual edit

10 January 2024

• 02:1602:16, 10 January 2024diff hist 0‎ mBritish Post Office scandal‎ →‎Reactions: Move link for SRA to the first occurrence of the initials instead of the second.Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4701:47, 10 January 2024diff hist −1‎ mBritish Post Office scandal‎ →‎Permission to appeal Judgment No 4 – May 2019: Copy edit.Tag: Visual edit

5 January 2024

• 16:1716:17, 5 January 2024diff hist −2‎ mBelinus‎ →‎Comments on historicity

3 January 2024

• 18:0418:04, 3 January 2024diff hist −8‎ mGerman cruiser Admiral Graf Spee‎ →‎Scuttling: "Multiple" is unnecessary. The plural "explosions" is sufficient.Tag: Visual edit

20 December 2023

• 22:2322:23, 20 December 2023diff hist +19‎ mChicken Run: Dawn of the Nugget‎ →‎Plot: Wow, a play area for chickens and for security systems …?!Tag: Visual edit

6 December 2023

• 15:5415:54, 6 December 2023diff hist +39‎ mThe Witcher (TV series)‎ →‎Season 3 (2023): Copy editing to clarify some phrasing.

25 November 2023

• 17:1917:19, 25 November 2023diff hist −1‎ mEva Victor‎ →‎Early life and education: Copy edit.Tag: Visual edit
• 17:1217:12, 25 November 2023diff hist +9‎ mBillions (TV series)‎ →‎Recurring: Copy edit

24 November 2023

• 12:2112:21, 24 November 2023diff hist −8‎ mBasque witch trials‎ “other similar”. Either one word or the other is sufficient. As “similar” is used in previous sentence, let’s opt for “other” here.

22 November 2023

• 00:3200:32, 22 November 2023diff hist +1‎ Paraguayan War‎ →‎Afro-Brazilians: Removal of incorrect apostrophe.Tag: Visual edit

19 November 2023

• 05:4505:45, 19 November 2023diff hist +24‎ mMea culpa‎ Copy edit to point out that the "beating" is only symbolic.currentTag: Visual edit
• 00:2900:29, 19 November 2023diff hist +6‎ mUnauthorized Living‎ →‎Cast: Clarification of ambiguous sentence.
• 00:1700:17, 19 November 2023diff hist +99‎ mFile:Meeting at Hendaye (en.wiki).jpg‎ →‎{{int:filedesc}}: Clarifying details added.

15 November 2023

• 22:2322:23, 15 November 2023diff hist 0‎ mKiowa language‎ →‎Revitalization efforts: Removal of incorrect apostrophe. Should be "2010s", the plural of several years in that decade, not "2010's", a possessive.Tag: Visual edit
• 17:0817:08, 15 November 2023diff hist −11‎ mFrancoist Spain‎ Let's use a simpler, more direct verb.