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21:3221:32, 15 November 2007diff hist −286‎ Jennifer Lopez‎ removed ref to possible status as richest Hispanic in Hollywood -- a gossip column isn't considered a credible source --
19:2219:22, 15 November 2007diff hist −15‎ Jennifer Lopez‎ →‎Early life: editing for clarity and flow

04:5004:50, 28 October 2007diff hist +25‎ Popcorn‎ →‎How popcorn pops: adding double temperature reference so C & F are given for wider readability
04:4604:46, 28 October 2007diff hist +7‎ Popcorn‎ →‎History: fixing a fix
04:4404:44, 28 October 2007diff hist +30‎ Popcorn‎ →‎History: mostly proofreading for clarity
04:3804:38, 28 October 2007diff hist −577‎ Popcorn‎ →‎History: challenges to "Bat Cave" findings belong elsewhere rather than featured in this section
04:2204:22, 28 October 2007diff hist +258‎ 3:10 to Yuma (2007 film)‎ →‎Plot: proofreading mostly -- add a few minor details for clarity
04:0204:02, 28 October 2007diff hist +27‎ 3:10 to Yuma (1957 film)‎ →‎Plot: just proofreading

10:5010:50, 7 October 2007diff hist +4‎ Master of Arts in Liberal Studies‎ adding in MA -- since some programs grant a general MA in .... (whatever the field is) -- PhD works this way too, so that was added also~~~~
10:4810:48, 7 October 2007diff hist +39‎ Master of Arts in Liberal Studies‎ fixing my own error w/ degree "initials"

18:1018:10, 6 October 2007diff hist −932‎ Popcorn‎ →‎Health: deleting plagiarized content ~~~~
18:0918:09, 6 October 2007diff hist +548‎ Talk:Popcorn‎ →‎Popcorn fumes: new section

21:4921:49, 11 August 2007diff hist +107‎ User:SwanSZ‎No edit summarycurrent

17:0217:02, 16 May 2007diff hist +174‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎English translation: smoothing the narrative describing the modern English translations~~~~
16:3816:38, 16 May 2007diff hist −57‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎English translation: removing repetition of date of publication ~~~~
16:2816:28, 16 May 2007diff hist +50‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎English translation: amending description of Kennedy; identification of the strengths of a standard translation are important~~~~
16:1416:14, 16 May 2007diff hist +47‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎History and Context: correcting date for Roberts translation; clarifying dialectic/rhetoric link~~~~
16:0816:08, 16 May 2007diff hist −14‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ altering paragraphing for clarity ~~~~
16:0716:07, 16 May 2007diff hist +266‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ restoring references deleted in a revert , shifting sections for clarity, revisions for factual integrity~~~~
15:5415:54, 16 May 2007diff hist +818‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ revision to establish the import of the work in the lead itself ~~~~
15:2515:25, 16 May 2007diff hist −238‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ fixing reference to proper references to the work are to "the Rhetoric" or to "Aristotle's Rhetoric"-- never to just "Rhetoric"; clarify rel btwn P & Ar's work to make text factually correct ~~~~
15:1015:10, 16 May 2007diff hist −341‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ shifting lead to be more easily readable by a general lay reader (which is the audience of a general encylopedia)--"oratorical"as a term is too limiting in scope and thus not accurate~~~~
15:0515:05, 16 May 2007diff hist +1,274‎ Talk:Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎Source request

23:0223:02, 15 May 2007diff hist +367‎ User talk:Anas Salloum‎ Hello and thanks
22:5822:58, 15 May 2007diff hist +5,239‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ importing significantly revised discussion with extended documentation--chapter descriptions coming next~~~~
22:5022:50, 15 May 2007diff hist −10‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎No edit summary
22:4922:49, 15 May 2007diff hist +804‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ starting to fill in chapter descriptions~~~~
22:3922:39, 15 May 2007diff hist +209‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ cleaning up references~~~~
22:1922:19, 15 May 2007diff hist +108‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ →‎English translation: adding in Jebb ref & fixing brackets~~~~
22:1722:17, 15 May 2007diff hist +257‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ →‎Further reading
22:1422:14, 15 May 2007diff hist −850‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ →‎Notes
22:1322:13, 15 May 2007diff hist +845‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ →‎English translation: adding in references to main translations~~~~
21:5421:54, 15 May 2007diff hist +89‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎No edit summary
21:3021:30, 15 May 2007diff hist 0‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎No edit summary
21:2721:27, 15 May 2007diff hist +1,193‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎No edit summary
20:1420:14, 15 May 2007diff hist +5‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎No edit summary
20:0720:07, 15 May 2007diff hist +5,008‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ first restructure of lead paragraph ~~~~
17:5217:52, 15 May 2007diff hist +5,320‎ User:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ creating sandbox for Rhetoric dev.
17:4917:49, 15 May 2007diff hist +7‎ NUser:SwanSZ/Sandbox‎ ←Created page with 'sandbox'
17:4817:48, 15 May 2007diff hist +14‎ User:SwanSZ‎ adding sandbox~~~~
17:2817:28, 15 May 2007diff hist +1,248‎ Wikipedia:Parenthetical referencing‎ correcting information, especially so that examples match the citation requirements given ~~~~
17:0917:09, 15 May 2007diff hist +1,966‎ Wikipedia talk:Parenthetical referencing‎ clarifying that info added prior is indeed accurate ~~~~

22:4422:44, 30 April 2007diff hist +355‎ Talk:Parenthetical referencing‎ →‎Page moves, NPV, and accuracy of information: ~~~~
22:3722:37, 30 April 2007diff hist +496‎ Wikipedia talk:Parenthetical referencing‎ →‎Swan's changes: ~~~~
22:3322:33, 30 April 2007diff hist +1,602‎ User talk:SlimVirgin/History 2‎ deja vu and reverts

21:4621:46, 29 April 2007diff hist +605‎ Wikipedia:Parenthetical referencing‎ →‎Page numbers: adding in a note that quotations require quotation marks and clarifying use of standardized references; delete Harvard Univ. style guide as it does not use Harvard referencing~~~~
21:3121:31, 29 April 2007diff hist +105‎ Wikipedia:Parenthetical referencing‎ correction of newpaper referencing, based on Curtin Univ "Harvard Referencing" p. 6; correcting duplication of author names in text and parentheses ; ~~~~
21:1221:12, 29 April 2007diff hist +410‎ Talk:Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎Under development: ~~~~
21:0921:09, 29 April 2007diff hist +657‎ Talk:Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎Source request: ~~~~
21:0121:01, 29 April 2007diff hist +5‎ Rhetoric (Aristotle)‎ →‎References: adding spacing and correcting name error ~~~~

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