Talk:Bengal tiger/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Jens Lallensack in topic GA Review
GA Review
editGA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 19:13, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
- Most generally, the article seems to have a lot of info about the tiger in general, but for this information there is already the article tiger. When specific information on the subspecies is given, it is often not marked as such. Generally, the article should focus on what sets the Bengal tiger apart, what are the differences to the other subspecies. This is not really done as far as I can see.
- Structure is also a mess. The "Characteristics" section has two sub-sections, both of which are on size, although size is already discussed in the paragraph preceding those sections.
- The "Conservation efforts" has sections (in this order) named "In India", "In captivity", "In Bangladesh", which seems chaotic.
- Section "In Bangladesh" does not have a source.
- Culture section has long lists of trivia.
I am stopping here; the article is not close to meeting the GA criteria yet, and needs significant improvement. I encourage the authors to re-nominate once this has been done (PeerReview would be a good point for additional input). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:13, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
🔥 Top keywords: Akademia e Shkencave e RPS te ShqiperiseAlexandria Ocasio-CortezBilderberg GroupCristiano RonaldoDong XiaowanMinecraftOperation GladioPrimal cutRiot FestStrictly Come Dancing (series 7)Main PageSpecial:SearchKalki 2898 AD2024 NBA draftWikipedia:Featured picturesUEFA Euro 2024Zaccharie RisacherJulian AssangeBronny JamesICC Men's T20 World CupBill CobbsCleopatra.xxxThe Bear (TV series)Deaths in 20242024 ICC Men's T20 World CupNag AshwinDalton KnechtAlexandre SarrMatas Buzelis2024 Copa AméricaCeline DionThe Boys season 4A Quiet Place: Day OneReed SheppardYouTubeZach EdeyThe Boys (TV series)Shifty ShellshockKalkiRob DillinghamUEFA European ChampionshipHouse of the DragonOpinion polling for the 2024 United Kingdom general electionInside Out 2Stephon CastleCopa AméricaThe Acolyte (TV series)Luis Arce